Mozart-Sonata k533/494 part I

[inicolae]

Please comment.

[pianistimo]

way to go!!!  my only advice is to occasionally bring out the left hand parts as melodically (or strongly) as the right.  you are just a tiny bit rh heavy.  seek a bit of balance between the two -even if you have a lot of melody in the rh.  highlight with yellow marker the parts that you want to have a 'conversation' with - between the rh and lh.  it will make it like one long conversation between rh and lh. 

[piano121]

Wow... realy nice! You have a beautifull phrasing, very delicate touch. I like the dinamics. Itīs very suitable to Mozartīs stile. I like the clarity of your LH. Even though pianistimo mentioned that in some parts you would bring it up a little, I like the way you are doing avery thing clear, even if itīs on the background. The scales, and Alberti bass, are very clear. I think itīs very easy on Mozart when you play the LH softer, to end up havin some parts a little messed up, and you sort of donīt listen it at all. But you did it all right. Keep it up.