Solstorm piano composition complete.

[d.smithy]

Yep here it is, my own composition.
                                                               
This is the complete one with a better quality, i hope. Still got some things that i wish to correct.

https://media.putfile.com/Solstorm-made-by-David 

Thank you for listening   

I appreciate criticism very much, feel free to post.

-David

[d.smithy]

I would play some parts louder and some other parts not-louder/silencer
 ( can't find the word in english)
But my mp3 can't record if i play it to loud, the music gets all daft.

[Derek]

I really like this melody, david. Very melancholy. and minor key.  I wouldn't criticise this composition at all, but I could provide reccommendations for your next compositions:  experiment with a greater variety of textures/harmonies/melodies/rhythms, etc. The more variety the better.   This piece reminds me a lot of some of my early work, I really like the rolling triplet bass like you're using, I still use it to this day at times.  Keep it up.

Sincerely,
-Derek.

[d.smithy]

Thanks for posting Derek
Yeah, next piece will be alot better then that one, hopefuly.