Well, you're off to a great start with this one! Nice work. Good tempo, sounds cheerful and happy... You're really excellent.
Really just some rhythm issues:
Opening 16th notes--quite difficult to discern your rhythm. You're correct that it's all a wash of sound, but feel the pulses at least internally
When the LH first gets the melody there was just a tad of rushing
When there's all the repeated chords in the LH and the ornaments in the right hand, you change tempos completely--this could well be intentional, which is fine IMO, but just checking to see if you noticed it
The part after that--very nice. I like the duet between the voices.
Syncopated part--rhythm drags just a bit....(mine did, too, when I played it)
Hope I didn't offend--I really just intend to help. You have a great technique and you're off to a beautiful start with this!