how is this video? and any tips on how to improve?

[alvinkei]

tips needed please.. i just 're-found' my interest in the piano

[quantum]

In the RH there are many places in the music where a dotted rhythm occurs.  Also where a 16th leads to a long note on a strong beat.  It is between these 16th pickups and the strong beat that you sometimes give a slight pause.  Try to think more of line in the melody, as the pauses cause the melodic line to become choppy.  Push to the end of the phrase - 16th pickups should lead to the main note. 

Hint: posting this in the audition room would probably give it better attention.