wow. what a difference a tuning makes! and, your playing is pearly and the endings aren't all staccato - but a nice combo of different types of detachments. you have a semi-paralyzed lh at times - like your fourth and fifth finger like to play together. but, that's ok. so do i. at least we're not like schumann and haven't completely broken our fingers. that control that you get between the fourth and fifth comes from a lot of practice. i'm just getting back into more practice, too. too bad we don't get paid for practicing. [/quote===oh, i didn't tune it---just repositioned the mic and it changed the sound--didn't really pratice the peice though. just ran through once while recording---sort of a first draft---. wuzn't aware of problem with fourth and fifth LH fingers---referring to accompiniment figure in LH at the end maybe?---there i'm used to a quicker tempo, and when i relaxed the tempo, LH wouldn't slow down---lack of control. i licken playing this peice to standing outside in public naked---everything all hangs out! i plan to practice different parts and reshape how i hear it. looking forward to that---thanks for your thoughts.