Hi gyzzmo, i mean if i were to walk on stage and play this, i would change a number of things, firstly as you rightly mention the ryhthm,secondly musical expression, and tempo, it is not sounding Molto Agitato at the momment (faster).
I dont have a teacher, so recording myself and posting it on this websight is of great help,infact listining to this prelude i learnt a lot.
Thanks for your comments.All the best

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