Yeah sorry Pies, but i have to agree with the rest. You probably already know yourself that you're making alot of mistakes, and the melody line isnt clear enough.
If i may give some advice, play it at a much slower speed, the speed at wich you hardly make any mistakes. The speed will come with time, but your mp3 sounds like a rape of this piece.
So slow down, and work on the melodies. Decent editions like Edition Peters show the accents/melodie.
Good luck, and post another mp3 in a month or later

Gyzzzmo