Sonatina in C 1st mvt "Pink Table" - composition with text - for loonbohol

[db05]

First attempt at writing in a real major key and sonata form. At first I was thinking sonata form but I got these ideas and the structure went out the window!! Hope it's not too chaotic, though.

I've always meant to compose something cheerful for my friend loonbohol, so here it is. But the text - kinda doesn't fit you, no? - was written in 2005, and meant for someone else entirely. The inspiration for the 1st mvt comes from the last stanza.


Pink Table by diablong-buang (db05)

Lie to me,
I said,
Tell me
that you're not going away

Forgive me,
I said,
'Cause I never
meant to push you away

All I need from you
is a lot of patience,
an open mind,
an open heart,
and time

Let's get plane tickets to nowhere
Where I can bleed
Where rain keeps falling down
in the summer heat

Keep me looking for light
in the darkness
Where everything else is far away
keep me stranded

All I want now is to be...

With you
how I love to argue
and lose
the debates I started
Come back
and slap my face again

Reality, dream, pain and hurt
the song keeps on playing in my head
Heavy, slow, light, singing, strumming, screaming in my head

But all I can think of is...

[loonbohol]

Cheerful 

THank you!

Sorry but mine was being too extravagant...

My so called new version of tsubasa Takes a lot of time to notate at anvil studio and It can take forever