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chopinatic

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I wanted to try writing some simple melodic pieces for my newborn daughter, so this is very short and completly spontanious improvisation. I recorded about 10 different improvs in the same key to try and find ideas i like for my daughter.

Let me know what you think! Good and bad.

thanks for listening

improv - ellie.mp3 (1315.95 kB - downloaded 81 times.)

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go12_3

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Re: Short Improvisation

Reply #1 on: March 16, 2009, 07:50:08 PM

Hi chopinatic: Your improv has the right idea, but I think too many runs here and there which can lose the melody. Probably simplify it and not make it too busy with some of the passages. And not so fast. What a nice thing for you to do for your new born daughter! Congratulations too! I do like your improvs and this one will be a promising one.
best wishes, go12_3

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chopinatic

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Re: Short Improvisation

Reply #2 on: March 16, 2009, 08:06:13 PM

Quote from: go12_3 on March 16, 2009, 07:50:08 PM

Hi chopinatic: Your improv has the right idea, but I think too many runs here and there which can lose the melody. Probably simplify it and not make it too busy with some of the passages. And not so fast. What a nice thing for you to do for your new born daughter! Congratulations too! I do like your improvs and this one will be a promising one.
best wishes, go12_3

Hi Go12_3

I completly agree with you about the runs! and the tempo. There just ideas i have some slower ones which once i sort through i will post. I'll also post the finished pieces!! She will have them drilled into her!! (Joking)

thanks for commenting

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pianowolfi

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Reply #3 on: March 16, 2009, 10:03:14 PM

Hi chopinatic

I always like these sort of ideas

Your improv is cute and cheerful. I'm sure your daughter will feel very welcome on this earth if you play for her

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Reply #4 on: March 17, 2009, 05:24:10 AM

Lovely and bright.

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chopinatic

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Re: Short Improvisation

Reply #5 on: March 17, 2009, 05:37:28 PM

Quote from: pianowolfi on March 16, 2009, 10:03:14 PM

Hi chopinatic

I always like these sort of ideas Your improv is cute and cheerful. I'm sure your daughter will feel very welcome on this earth if you play for her

hehe, thanks for the comment. I was aiming for cute really so thats good you mentioned that!!!

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chopinatic

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Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 05:43:08 PM

Quote from: goldentone on March 17, 2009, 05:24:10 AM

Lovely and bright.

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Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 09:34:09 PM

Nice

Very peaceful and elegant.

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chopinatic

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Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 10:42:13 PM

Quote from: hey_jude98 on March 17, 2009, 09:34:09 PM

Nice Very peaceful and elegant.

I was'nt going for peaceful, more playful!!!!

Thanks for commenting !

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