Short Improvisation

[chopinatic]

I wanted to try writing some simple melodic pieces for my newborn daughter, so this is very short and completly spontanious improvisation. I recorded about 10 different improvs in the same key to try and find ideas i like for my daughter.

Let me know what you think! Good and bad.

thanks for listening

[go12_3]

Hi chopinatic:  Your improv has the right idea, but I think too many runs here and there which can lose the melody.  Probably simplify it and not make it too busy with some of the passages.  And not so fast.    What a nice thing for you to do for your new born daughter!  Congratulations too!  I do like your improvs and this one will be a promising one. 
best wishes,  go12_3

[chopinatic]

Hi chopinatic:  Your improv has the right idea, but I think too many runs here and there which can lose the melody.  Probably simplify it and not make it too busy with some of the passages.  And not so fast.    What a nice thing for you to do for your new born daughter!  Congratulations too!  I do like your improvs and this one will be a promising one. 
best wishes,  go12_3

Hi Go12_3

I completly agree with you about the runs! and the tempo. There just ideas i have some slower ones which once i sort through i will post. I'll also post the finished pieces!! She will have them drilled into her!! (Joking)

thanks for commenting

[pianowolfi]

Hi chopinatic

I always like these sort of ideas  Your improv is cute and cheerful. I'm sure your daughter will feel very welcome on this earth if you play for her

[goldentone]

Lovely and bright.

[chopinatic]

Hi chopinatic

I always like these sort of ideas  Your improv is cute and cheerful. I'm sure your daughter will feel very welcome on this earth if you play for her

hehe, thanks for the comment. I was aiming for cute really so thats good you mentioned that!!!

[chopinatic]

Lovely and bright.

[hey_jude98]

Nice Very peaceful and elegant.

[chopinatic]

Nice Very peaceful and elegant.

I was'nt going for peaceful, more playful!!!! Thanks for commenting !