hmm...while I admit I don't know much about sorabji's music, I can say I liked this. which is weird, because I don't like any of the other pieces of his that I've heard.
Not too bad but it should sound a little lighter in sound in places not so harsh and loud and some melodic lines need a little more clarity. Aim for a humid stuffy atmosphere in your playing Great work.
Thank you everyone for commenting.I would recommend checking out his earlier stuff as well as the nocturnes (Le Jardin Parfume, Gullistan, Djami, etc.). He wrote some really wonderful music that I believe most anyone would be able to appreciate.