I only got a chance to listen to the 2nd mvt. overall I found it to be quite nice. there's a few instances of missed notes that are of little consequence, and one instance of a wrong chord during the 3rd variation, but overall these do not significantly detract. I like your choice of tempo and the stability of it throughout, and overall you have a good balance between accompaniment and melody, although there are a few instances where one protruded a bit, which could just be related to the recording technique. the first variation feels like it actually needs the most work--your right hand feels a bit too legato. the second and third variations were great though!
I look forward to having a chance to listen to the rest of your work.