op.117 no.1 - Stunning voicing! This intermezzo is so difficult to get the true transparent sound. Either one only hears the top e-flats, or one only hears the tune. I can hear the variety of touch quite clearly. Also, excellent and clear pedaling. One can tell, your ear is working very hard to get the right combination of sounds. Wonderful.
op.117 no.2 - I'm not as convinced, though it is good pianism. I wonder if the tempo is a little too fast? Somehow, the languorous character is not coming through as well. Yes, I think the tempo is too fast. I would approach this more along the lines of op.119 no.1, where the notes seem to unfold from each other in mid-air, like sagging branches.
op.117 no.3 - This might also be just one or two notches too fast. It's a small complaint, but one doesn't feel the music is unfolding with ease. Also, could it open softer? sotto voce is really a very important indication. What a sound in the middle section, beauty and transparency. The phrasing in the right hand captures the pensive, almost curious mood, but the fast tempo takes away from it somewhat. Well, one has one's whole life to get slower after all.
Walter Ramsey