thoughts about two drafts i'm workking on (videos)

[accauditor]

that one is completely improvised i just told my brother to video me and that's what came out,
i like it and i want to elaborate on it, just want your thoughts

that's a section of a fantsy i'm working on at the moment, it's just a first draft if someone have any thougt on it or rewriting it or would like to contribute with a vartiation your more than welcome and i'd appreciate it.

keep in mind
1- i'm selft taught i never studied compostion or preforming (i only had 10 lessons when i first bought the piano) so don't judge my playing for i'm an auditor not a virtuoso
2- the piano is out of tune so don't freak out perfect pitch people.