Winter Sun - Original Composition

[theoaksdonsad]

Hi guys,I'm new at this forum, so... I'm a portuguese 17-year-old boy who loves classical music, especially piano deeply emotional pieces, and contemporary film soundtracks.

So, I'm a begginer at music and piano (learning since October 2009), and this is my first piano composition. This was composed for a very special person, but I wanna know your opinion BEFORE I play this to that person 

The piece is really simple, but anyway , I'd like know waht do you think about it... Btw, my "heroes" are Ludwig van Beethoven and the film music composer Alexandre Desplat.

So... help please