technically this is really great!!
I believe your work now has to be done actually in the slower and quiter places. in many places your playing is too agressive, and you fail to create the correct the atmosphere. plus, if you would use a wider dynamic range in some places it would be great! for example, in the first scale after the octaves, the music must fade away- and you almost don't do any diminuendo.
But this is really great! you create beautiful tension in many places and your technique is great

just take your time in the slower sections.