Sorrow and Happiness (Original Composition)

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Hey everyone,
   This is one of the very first compositions that I wrote a year or so ago.  I first recorded it with my webcam, and have been going back and redoing the ones that were recorded with my webcam.  So this one I just did today and wanted to know what everyone thought of it.  Please let me know what you think, what I can improve on, and maybe a way to improve?  Thanks!  Here's the link.