Bravo! would love to hear it on real piano. Don't you ever have the chance to play one? Sometimes I noticed the way you hammered out a few notes in the right hand, and that would never go over on a real piano. But I like the conception. No frills - straight forward. nice dynamics. But work on that 2 against three!
Good job.Be careful to not be too straight forward. Now it's almost like a metronome. Think about the slurs, and the chords, and when it needs a bit more time.And also, don't hammer out every first beat.