Does this sound right to you?

[danfloun]

Hi,

I started to learn She's Always a Women by Billy Joel, but found part of it did not sound right to me, unfortunately this put me off and I went on to learn A New York State of Mind instead.

I'd like to learn that first piece now, but I still have my reservations as to weather the transcription is right.

See attachment.
I've marked the parts that, to me, sound 'odd'.

If someone can just play it through and see what they think that would be great.
It's most likely me not playing it right.

Thanks
Danny