Curator looses a painting. She finds it in a week's time

[kobrowsky]

Hello!

This is one of my earlier improvisation and also one I am most proud of. I'm a begginer in piano playing (played accordion for about 10 years and then after 7 years of not playing I decited to buy a piano and started practicing.

I would really appreciate if other pianists listened to my playing and commented on it. Show no mercy.

Now then... how do I insert audio?
Anyways, this is the link to it on my blog: https://kobrowsky.sopca.com/2008/06/27/kustosinja-zgubi-sliko-najde-jospece-stedndni/

[chopinatic]

Good job for a beginner, i like your ideas and effort here, i thought you could have taken the piece further, and not made it so "boring" Change up the dymanics and tempo.

Other than that though, keep going, good job.

[kobrowsky]

Good job for a beginner, i like your ideas and effort here, i thought you could have taken the piece further, and not made it so "boring" Change up the dymanics and tempo.

Other than that though, keep going, good job.

Thank you for your comment. People often fall asleep when I play. Even I do sometimes. That's why there's often a sound of melon falling on the keyboard in my music.
I'll improve through time

[barbg]

Very beautiful & well done!