Mozart kv 284, take 2

[pianisten1989]

This was a minor unofficial recital for like friends and parents.
I was a bit shaky in the start, so the tempo is a bit here and there...

Anyway, tell me what you think
And oh, If anyone has any advice about those freaking thirds, plz share them!

[birba]

Very good work!  I liked your phrasing and the direction of the melodic lines.  And, the finger-work, of course, excellent.  The only gripe I have is the introduction to the second theme.  Play it in strict time but with the melodic intention in the phrasing.  It's sort of confusing - in the recapitulation as well.  I don't know what thirds you are talking about.  The right hand accompaniment in the beginning of the development is sort of weak, rythimically.  Don't know why.  But I liked your interpretation of this little played sonata very much!

[pianisten1989]

... My whole comment disappeared, what a bummer...

Anyway, thx for listening and commenting

The second theme is the most difficult one, I think. It's the first personal part in the sonata, so it need some time, but I understand what you mean, and will try to improve it

if you've got the score, it's the thirds in bar 40 and 43 (and 112 and 115)

[slow_concert_pianist]

Very good work!  I liked your phrasing and the direction of the melodic lines.  And, the finger-work, of course, excellent.  The only gripe I have is the introduction to the second theme.  Play it in strict time but with the melodic intention in the phrasing.  It's sort of confusing - in the recapitulation as well.  I don't know what thirds you are talking about.  The right hand accompaniment in the beginning of the development is sort of weak, rythimically.  Don't know why.  But I liked your interpretation of this little played sonata very much!

This is a nice perormance and the 3rds he is talking about are in the right hand part at bars 40 & 43 Birba. These are paricularly difficult to play "in time" "at speed"....if that makes sense.

I am not talking about your "memory lapse" ritenuto's Pianstein, but at 2 places you failed at demostrating you were Horowitz. Play it as written and you will become a breath taking pianist - if you work hard.

[pianisten1989]

This is a nice perormance and the 3rds he is talking about are in the right hand part at bars 40 & 43 Birba. These are paricularly difficult to play "in time" "at speed"....if that makes sense.

I am not talking about your "memory lapse" ritenuto's Pianstein, but at 2 places you failed at demostrating you were Horowitz. Play it as written and you will become a breath taking pianist - if you work hard.

Those thirds are extremely difficult. Not even Utchida plays them perfectly
but thx for your comment.
Haha, I'm prepared to work hard
What places are you talking about?

[slow_concert_pianist]

I will need to relisten to tell you precisely, but now time for bed!!!!

Give me a few days to focus on this again

[lluiscl]

I liked your flügel!! Not a japanese... Not S&S or Bechstein... May be a Bosy? It's an old restored?
Thanks for shared.

[pianisten1989]

A bluthner actually From like 1920s, thx for noticing

[point of grace]

oh, it's really good... i loved the tempo