I listened to it a couple of times. fiendishly difficult, I imagine. I have Sorabji's transcription of the Salome final waiting for me, but don't have the courage to start "digging in"!
Then take courage and go for it! OK, it really IS fiendishly difficult, several pages approching the end also being physically exhausting, almost like the very different
Ondine but taken to the nth degree.
Anyway, you play it very well and have a complete mastery of the notes I think.
It came across rather faintly on my computer but, as far as I could tell, yes, it's pretty much there!
What you could do is play more emphasis on the displaced (?) accents of the chords accompanying the running 16th (?) notes. It'll make it more exciting. Jazz it up a bit. (when ahinton reads this...
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...which he now has - he'd agree!
But I always like it when I hear new music here. I would never have heard of Sorabji if I hadn't joined pianostreet.com.
Well, there are all manner of different routes whereby to encounter his work; I'm pleased that you happened to find this one.
Best,
Alistair