Original Composition

[rummi]

Hi everyone this is me playing an original composition with an original title Piece in D minor. The beginning is the end of Beethoven's Sonata in C Minor which isn't supposed to be there because they recorded to early ( damn you mom!!!).  Please enjoy even though i mess up my own piece a few times.   



ok its there now

[pianoman53]

It's nice when people compose their won pieces. And I ejnoyed the melody (it remindes me of a tv program I watched when I was a child).

What I can say is, that I don't understand what time signature it is. I also think you should do a bit more of a build up until you reach the louder parts.


(about the pathetique: Make sure to count all the pauses, now you were way off, and to make it evenly)

[rummi]

Its very nice of you to reply thank you. 

Your critisicm is very valid (i dont even know what the time signature is lol). Also at the ending of the pathetique the long pauses you hear are me trying to find the chords... luckily i am an engineer