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Topic: Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1  (Read 2141 times)

Offline maras_osk

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Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1
on: November 20, 2011, 07:54:38 PM
Here it is

This is my first post here and I would like to hear some constructive criticism. Playing starts just after 1:00

Thanks :)

Offline arielpiano

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Re: Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1
Reply #1 on: November 29, 2011, 02:23:47 PM
I don't think there is nearly enough clarity and definition. I would begin with very strict timekeeping, using a metronome and forgetting about the pedal for a while. And maybe I would do a few etudes before jumping on the scherzos.

Offline megadodd

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Re: Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1
Reply #2 on: November 29, 2011, 05:32:29 PM
I'm not good enough to play this.
None of my classmates either, so i've never heard another student play it.
Only proffessionals, and it's not really fair to compare you with like, pletnev for example.
But if I do, there is certainly pedaling and some accenting to work on.

But, nonetheless bravo!
Repertoire.
2011/2012

Brahms op 118
Chopin Preludes op 28
Grieg Holberg Suite
Mendelssohn Piano trio D minor op 49
Rachmaninoff Etude Tabelaux op 33 no 3 & 4 op 39 no 2
Scriabin Preludes op 1

Offline williampiano

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Re: Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1
Reply #3 on: December 04, 2011, 07:40:14 PM
You may want to work on improving your sound a little bit. In some of the faster sections the notes seemed a bit jumbled and not very clear. You should probably spend a little more time playing slowly with the metronome or playing hands separate. Other than that, your dynamics seemed good and you included a lot of shaping in your playing. Congratulations on learning and memorizing all of it! I'm not too familiar with this work of Chopin's, but it seems very challenging.

Offline megadodd

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Re: Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1
Reply #4 on: December 04, 2011, 08:27:13 PM
but it seems very challenging.

Think of the Chopin etudes as a build-up for the scherzos.
Atleast, this is what my teacher tells me. Before I've done all op 10. No scherzos.
Repertoire.
2011/2012

Brahms op 118
Chopin Preludes op 28
Grieg Holberg Suite
Mendelssohn Piano trio D minor op 49
Rachmaninoff Etude Tabelaux op 33 no 3 & 4 op 39 no 2
Scriabin Preludes op 1

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Re: Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1
Reply #5 on: December 04, 2011, 08:59:06 PM
Not enough clarity and contrast in my opinion. Also lacking some soul in your music. But a scherzo is hard and I commend you for an effort.

Think of the Chopin etudes as a build-up for the scherzos.
Atleast, this is what my teacher tells me. Before I've done all op 10. No scherzos.


Except that Scherzi are jsut as hard as etude, but only that they are like 2-3 etudes combined.

JL
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Re: Chopin - Scherzo in b minor op. 20 no. 1
Reply #6 on: December 04, 2011, 11:30:29 PM
Definitely try doing some slower work with a metronome; some faster sections do sound somewhat jumbled. Also, I think try toning down the pedal a bit.
Your work so far is admirable, nonetheless. I wish you luck in perfecting this incredibly difficult piece.
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