Very respectable playing, maybe a little hard-driven. You seem to have a habit of placing accents in strange places, which was more disturbing in take 1 than in take 2. Are you used to playing jazz ? You seem well aware of the voicing and are doing mostly right with it, though in places it could better. I thought I heard one or two some tiny misreadings/slips but nothing serious. I can't say I like your ending, it's like the fugue simple deflates. All in all, promising Bach playing. You should keep working at this a bit more.