thanks guys, your feed back is a big bonus. I liked the most serious critics, the worst the better. I wont take it heart or personal like some people do.

Musical expresiion that i s what I aimed for now, let the tempo go'
. I now, use metronome and working on my music instead of tempo. The only place I cheated, was repeat of the main theme that I struck C with aid of my whrist and towards the final bflat chord. Other places perhaps LH, I was being lazy just let it flop and drop on the keys. or put this way, I slide

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Ok,hopefully in few weeks time I come up with full of musical expression version. Thanks Agian.