I like it. Cheesy ? Meaning cheaply hackneyed and sentimental ? Don't care. I'd rather that sort of stuff than sit through an interminable Beethoven slow movement or fugueing horrible Mozart. Anyway a lot of Liszt is a jolly sight more banal than that. It rather reminds me of silent film music, except it's better. No doubt the forum will think I have kinked taste but I'm long past caring. The spirit of the piece is like Chaminade's "Elevation"; all the experts say that's atrocious for much the same reasons.Oh dear, how sad, never mind. More improvisation from you please.
You can make money with this kind of playing. I can not count the number of grand pianos at restaurants begging for a performer, including the ones on cruise ships. Can you keep this up for a 45 minute set?My minor suggestions would be to modulate into minor and to clear the mud. Also during a long set contrast the big sound by going simple.
You are doing really great, I could listen to your playing the whole evening, in a bar, with a drink, and, of course, I'd certainly upset my prospective date because I'd be so fascinated by the pianist...
More improvisation from you please.