The three legged dog made me smile from the first moment, the tune seems so familiar and yet I can't place it. It makes me think of some clunky piano in a western or something, pretty cool.The 'almost pretty' is really pretty almost to the end, it somehow falls apart after the 2nd minute or so, perhaps that's what you meant by the title? Was it impossible for you to stay with the initial mood or did you not even try and just played what you wanted? (<- This sentence came out different in writing than I wanted it to be, please don't think that it is a criticism, just simple curiosity.)