My composition titled "Forgotten Dream"

[poetofthefall21]

Hi, I'm new here and I'd like to hear your opinion about something I made a few months ago.
Here it is:

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This composition's title is Forgotten Dream, and it's the first one I ever made. I'm a self-taught pianist still practicing my piano skills through tutorials so yeah, I'm hoping to get even better as the time passes. Please comment and tell me your opinion.

[kakeithewolf]

Quite a nice first composition. Better as a first than most of what I've made can be considered.

Could have used the pedal a bit more, though.

[poetofthefall21]

Quite a nice first composition. Better as a first than most of what I've made can be considered.

Could have used the pedal a bit more, though.

Thank you for your comment. Actually I made this on my piano keyboard since right now I can't afford an actual piano so I have to make do. Thanks again for the feedback!:)

[kakeithewolf]

Thank you for your comment. Actually I made this on my piano keyboard since right now I can't afford an actual piano so I have to make do. Thanks again for the feedback!:)

I believe you can get sustain pedals for keyboards.

[poetofthefall21]

I believe you can get sustain pedals for keyboards.

Thanks, I'll check it out.