(I'm not english so, I apologize for all the errors)
Apart from the wrong notes and technical problems, it's not a bad interpretation.
I'd suggest to:
- improve the entry of the theme, measure 17. You should wait a little more before the A flat octave in the left hand. Do the same thing, in measure 33.
Remember that this piece is well-known, so the audience expects to be amused; and i guess that these details make the difference for a good performance.
- Be careful! You skipped a measure ( 82- 83)
Moreover, I don't like the diminuendo , measures 81; I think, on the contrary, you have to do a crescendo ( in my opinion ).
The part with the octaves in the left hand is well done, bravo. Maybe you should only go a little faster.
Good work also from the measure 119 to the resumption ( except a few errors )
- The coda is a little crude.
I guess that the piece is almost ready; keep on this way

( I didn't analysed the beginning, 'cause I think it's only a problem with the notes(little study), isn't it?)