On the wings ( My composed song

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Hello,
I want to show you my 1st composed piano song. Its called On the wings. Its my 1st piano song, cause I have been playing the piano 1 year ( I played the keyboard, but its very stupid, cause you play in the left hand chords and in the right melody with some rhytm.) and I am young .-D (17), So, i havent much experience with composing songs... I only composed some songs for my band (guitar, keyboard, vocal...), but piano song never... So, I am inquisitive to your opinions.
Thank you