Hmm, you couldn't tell where I went properly, you say? heh....no comment.
It is too bad noone could find it in their heart to listen to the damn thing, it was only 8.31 long, even shorter than that considering I took a breath before I started.
Sorry, of course I listened to it. I just don't feel competent to comment much on pieces of this calibre, since I don't play them myself It sounded like the Ballade to me and I think it's great you've gotten so far with it. It didn't seem completely ready, but I guess it wasn't supposed to be. And it was definitely you, with all the tattoos
I listened to it too and started to reply, but it got very complicated and i decided to hold off, as it was a work "in progress". Your intro is ideal, musically. I remember i had a teacher once who made me play slow movements faster, to understand the musical intention better. And your intro sounded like that. The architecture of the ascending and descending passage was perfect. It had direction and movement. Just a bit slower, now, and you've got it. Yes, the coda was a mess. Still needs lots of work. I notice you sit very high. I don't know whether this hinders your articulation or not. Have you always sat this high?Anyway, i'm curious to hear the final product.