Original piano composition - The Joy Of Little Things

[poetofthefall21]

Here's one composition I finished today. It's another simple piano piece titled The Joy Of Little Things. I appreciate any feedback you can give me, thanks!:)

[starstruck5]

 Einaudi like, but sweet - I think the melody is a little weak though -those rhythmic skips make it a bit over complicated, I doesn't stay in the mind-not in my mind anyhow - - -where you develop the theme though,  it quite beautiful , if a bit cliched-Your left hand is a bit heavy also btw. 

All the same you definitely have promise as a composer -keep writing!

[poetofthefall21]

Einaudi like, but sweet - I think the melody is a little weak though -those rhythmic skips make it a bit over complicated, I doesn't stay in the mind-not in my mind anyhow - - -where you develop the theme though,  it quite beautiful , if a bit cliched-Your left hand is a bit heavy also btw. 

All the same you definitely have promise as a composer -keep writing!

Hi, thank you for your feedback! Einaudi is actually one of my major influences. Yeah, I noticed that too about the left hand but somehow it's hard for me to synchronize both hands so they have equal volume. Anyway, thanks again for your advices, I will!:)