Falling leaves - Petrof Semi Concert Grand Piano PII

[jittqm]

I cant read a note and have no training but was looking for feedback on a composition

Andy

[awesom_o]

It's pretty good but I can't really hear the leaves falling.

My advice would be to get a bit of training, and learn to read at least several notes. Keep trying.

 Many of the greatest composers were also skilled at reading music and this helped them to write their music well. Before even trying to write anything they had already played many pieces of composers who came before them. They learned much about how to compose music by playing the music that was already composed.

You have much talent in you. You can feel the music. I can tell. Not everyone can feel the music. Learn to read, preferably ALL the notes, but at the very least one or two, and greatness will eventually be yours.

[jittqm]

Thanks for taking the time to comment.  A friend came over and recorded my piano compositions and provided the name "Falling Leaves".  Tell you the truth ... I cant hear the leaves falling either!!  lol