kakeithewolf,can you play and feel that what you wrote? I am sorry, but I am not capable to feel a 33/32 meter. How could you forget the form? The form is written down on the sheet!!!
OK, you made a 3/2 out of it. But look at your rhythmic grouping inside the first bar for example. It is not written as a regular 3/2. A 3/2 meter is notated in a different manner. Please study --> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time_signatureAlso the rest of the song is rhythmically written wrong.The form of a piece of music you obbey counting the bars and dividing them into general sense based parts. You can do this on pieces who have a form.In your case you first should clear up the rhythmic notation because form also has to do something with rhythm!
Free form? Improvisation?Is that you improvising and music notation software notating it? It kind of looks like that...
You meant to notate it like that? I was thinking the 8ths could have a phrase mark instead of double dot. It's hard to read.