Hi ronde,
Wow, what a piece--highly virtuosic! Thalberg's music is often difficult to play, and especially when he employs his third hand technique. I believe that you do well keeping the melodic line in the limelight, while maintaining the accompaniment in the background--very good balancing the hands to accomplish it with so much going on. Also when melody is within the chords, you think about horizontal direction and voice the chords accordingly, also allowing those chords to resonate that are clearly harmony. There is a good deal of filigree present, arpeggiated accompaniment for example, and you judiciously restrain it to always allow the melody to soar. I noticed too that sometimes in the piece there are scalar figures which you allow to be sufficiently heard, which is proper, as scales take on importance in composition. The scale in thirds was wonderfully executed. The octaves are always well executed too. You also play the various touches masterfully. I liked how you take advantage of the quieter dynamics to leave yourself ample space to "spend" crescendos. Whatever the challenges, you certainly demonstrate a formidable technique to deal with them effectively. Very importantly, you always play with clarity. Very fine and impressive playing, ronde. Congratulations on a marvelous rendition of this transcription. You always play with musicianship and artistry which is the case here as well. Thanks for posting this music.
David