1:55 - rhythm is off during this section, funky hesitations throughout
2:30 - sounds like keyboard dabbling, loses momentum into the lyrical section.
6:00 - more forward moment and expression; faster and louder.
7:00 - RH accelerates the motive which changes the perceived tempo and character.
General comment about dynamics, maybe it's an issue with the piano not being easily powerful, but it sounded like loud parts weren't loud enough. I'm pretty certain this is a technical issue, specifically it would be much easier to increase dynamics if you sat higher.
Otherwise, pretty decent control over tone.