Romanze in A-flat (sketch) Original Composition Video

[alistaircrane4]

piece is still unfinished but I feel like it will turn out to be a good one. Give your thoughts and constructive criticisms

[awesom_o]

For me, you relied a little too heavily harmonically on the relationship between Ab major and F minor, and the runs in the right hand were too 'noodle-y' to offer much in the way of  development.

I think you should try to develop your style to be more structurally concise, more harmonically adventurous, and ultimately, more individual.