Why do you have a month to play it? Audition?More importantly, what do you think you need to improve?
The first thing I heard from the very opening measure was that you're being held back by the way you move your fingers. Watching the video confirmed that this is exactly what you are doing. There's a constant co-contraction where your fingers are extended and curled simultaneously. You may not even feel this co-contraction but it's preventing you from being able to play freely, making performance slower.
Accentuate the trill much more between the g and aflat at three minutes into your recording. That specific part is very important to that section as it releases the tension built up by the emajor section and the modulation back to the tonic. You should have more notes in that trill.
Oh, you're right. Very good remark, thank you!
Ooh, faulty wants something played faster? Didn't see that coming..!The speed is fine.
What's lacking in the first octaves is the atmosphere. It's difficult to put the finger on it, but I feel that it's not calm enough. The color can also be a bit more on the top, but it's probably because of the piano and the camera.Then, the second half of the second bar; The phrasing isn't right. The G should have an "accent" and the E, in the 3rd bar should have a small one. That's the basic line. Notes after the G (f, e) and after the E (d, c) should be played in a diminuendo. Now there are accents in those smaller notes, which is not right. How you treat the long E in the third bar is up to you - either with a tiny bit of time, or with an accent. Both will work.
Then you need to feel the c (the first note of the theme) muuuuch more. It's completely empty, only a c major, without a top note (and fermata!) and suddently this c is coming. It's like you're having a dream, and suddenly you wake up to a much darker reality.
A general thing is that the left hand has to be more melodic. Voice the top of the chords, and not the full chord.
Where Alistaircrane4 mentioned the trill, I want to mention the harmonies. You need more direction, otherwise you get stuck.
When I played I had a feeling that I suffocate a little, so maybe speeding up a little will help me .
Using a specific example, this is how you play octaves with your left hand:1. Tense hand and fingers2. Press down with forearmInstead:Squeeze the fingers to depress the keys. Combine this movement with forearm press.** The forearm press alone is not an efficient movement. Adding a slight forward motion makes it more so.
Thanks for the tips, pianoplayer002 and faulty_damper. When I practiced today I think I felt the proper motion, so there is hope for me. I'll try to play like this in this week, only slowly with attention to this kind of motion. I'll work on bigger sections without playing to not come back to old habits, but to still work on the interpretation. It'll be an experiment, but if I'll be successful, then quality of my playing will be much better, so I don't think that I've anything to lose. It can't be worse .I wonder how long does it take to play like this instinctively... The sad thing is that when I tried to record small spot to see the difference my old habits came back. So no camera for a while . The other problem is my performance anxiety, but maybe with better feeling of movements it'll be easier to manage it.
I practiced today and I think it's not about tension. I just want too much to play it good, without mistakes, etc. And when I strive, these co-contraction happen. If I were tense in normal meaning of this word, I wouldn't be able to play this piece even in this way. When I tried to be so loose and even indifferent to what I play, everything started to be a lot of easier, natural. And the sound was better... And there was so nice flow (and faster tempo) in this octave section in G flat and I hadn't a temptation to slow down to shape anything. The shape I imagined was still there...I practice a lot in slow tempo. Maybe this my second problem, because it's easy to lost efficiency in movements. Maybe it's time to practice more in faster tempo - to have a better flow. I think my practice stopped some levels below my abilities and I can't freed myself from these practice habits. And this thing is stopping my progress. Does it make any sense?
It's hard to see all the fingers of your right hand, but your 2nd finger is definitely doing some odd, co-contracty things. Make sure you allow this finger to remain in its natural shape. The same goes for the 4th on your left hand.
In the coda, you have an example of "inefficiency". I can see your arm bouncing up and down on each note, and it looks like you are pressing down on your fingers with your arm. Those are some fast notes, so you don't have time to play them like that. They need to be played with finger action, the arm taking no part in pressing down the key (but always remaining free and supple, loose).