I haven't learned this piece yet but it's a piece that I want to learn, so take this for what it's worth:
* Yeah, I agree that the recording is a bit too loud, but that's a function of the piano you got and the microphone you got (for me, the piano I use is a Steinway Model B in a very large room and a camera with a video record function so I have the same problem too...if the camera's close then the sound is too loud, if I move it away then you hear a bunch of the echoes from the room). I think this piece though kind of loses the shimmering harp-like effect of the arpeggios because of it.
* In the arpeggios, I feel like your bass notes have a bit too much space around them. While musically it's natural to give a slight pause after playing the bass note (to let it resonate a bit before continuing with the arpeggios), it seems like you're adjusting the timing of the phrasing by playing the arpeggio at full speed, then pausing before playing the bass note. I think this latter gap should be smaller (i.e. I guess by slowing down the arpeggio as you descend, rather than by making the pause before the bass note bigger).
* At 1:20, it seems like after the melody notes are played, the part of the arpeggio on those same notes are too loud (I'm guessing it's because of the string still vibrating a lot from playing the melody notes). This almost makes it seem like the melody is eighth notes instead of quarter notes. It's particularly noticeable on the F# and A.
* I just noticed your adjusting your glasses as part of the switching hands effect. (Sometimes the hands switch places, sometimes they move up to adjust glasses!) Not necessarily a bad thing, just that it's more noticeable in this piece because of how much the hands move back and forth.