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Offline pianistforever894

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original composition , opinion?
on: July 27, 2015, 02:52:38 AM
Hi,

I recently started composing piano pieces and would love to get some feedback.
Is there is anything I should change about the tempo or the melody ?

Thank you for listening!

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Offline 28843253

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Re: original composition , opinion?
Reply #1 on: July 27, 2015, 10:03:59 AM
A good start. Conventional chord progression and a easily likable melody. The variation in dynamics is a good touch. Is there more to say here?
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Offline pianistforever894

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Re: original composition , opinion?
Reply #2 on: July 27, 2015, 10:29:15 AM
thank you so much!  :)
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theholygideons

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Re: original composition , opinion?
Reply #3 on: July 27, 2015, 10:34:33 AM
What would I change regarding the melody? nothing. Instead, your chord progression has no nuisance to it, it is very basic (one of the main reasons I dislike mainstream music) although I don't blame you if you're just beginning.
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