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pianistforever894

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need feedback for my original composition

on: July 27, 2015, 11:04:19 AM

Hello,

I recently started composing and would like to get some feedback on my latest melody !
Any comments are appreciated
thank you

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josh93248

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Re: need feedback for my original composition

Reply #1 on: August 03, 2015, 10:06:21 PM

Hmmm... Not bad. Not quite to my personal taste but not bad.

I would like more variety and structural definition in your piece. It was a bit samey overall. I think that you have a sincere creative voice though so keep trying.

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pianoworthy

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Re: need feedback for my original composition

Reply #2 on: August 05, 2015, 02:46:58 AM

I thought it was a bit banal, lacking in complexity. I think a layman or complete non-musician would enjoy this, but it didn't do much for me.

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