The only thing I could say to improve this is that it didn't really feel "your own", so to speak.
I could tell Josh Wright (who, I should say, I also love as a pianist and I think he produces excellent teaching videos) was a major influence (obviously, he's your teacher, lol), but it seems to be almost exactly the same as his performances both recording for the Chopin Competition and at the competition.
Still, though, good. I just don't see a whole lot different between yours and his.
Cheers! You're quite good, as are your compositions.