Ahh, haydn. I played a piece like this in fall of 2010, it was a great time of my life, your piece just brought back happy memories and yellow and red leaves falling off the trees. Thanks and good playing, I would pass you if I was the judge.
Yes, speed it up, when you can. Never play something faster than you can play it.
your balance settles more into itself as it gets going in recent ver. it's nice. I would address your voicing and lh vs rh balance at the very beginning but other than that, really great work.
Hé visitor,thanks for your remarks. I was wondering what you mean buy voicing... Should i let the top note of the thirds come out more?And should the left hand be more quiet?thx!