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Topic: Piano concerto in F major (original)  (Read 1389 times)

Offline rachconcerto

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Piano concerto in F major (original)
on: September 06, 2015, 04:08:17 PM
Advise on how to continue this concerto is needed. Opinions on the first part are more than welcome !
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Offline dcstudio

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #1 on: September 06, 2015, 07:49:42 PM

geez.. Rachfan is a good name for you!! lol

WOW.  I have to say the beginning was a little slow and predictable...but at around 2:20 things start to get really interesting, and then it just ROCKS.

I am completely impressed...I certainly didn't expect to hear what I heard when I clicked that link.

your orchestration is cool... yeah...it's a bit "Rachy"  but so what.. 

damn! that is good.  I am afraid just one listening will not suffice... I will get back to you with any humble suggestions I might have.

Bravo!

Offline rachconcerto

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #2 on: September 06, 2015, 08:35:14 PM
Thanks ! I am glad you liked it ! I am a HUGE fan of rach concertos ( 2 & 3 are the best pieces ever composed ).

Offline francoisfj

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #3 on: September 06, 2015, 09:09:27 PM
Wow it's really good! I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work :)

Offline dcstudio

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #4 on: September 06, 2015, 10:10:03 PM


still listening... ;D

Offline pianoguy711

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #5 on: September 30, 2015, 05:19:54 AM
wow, I agree 2:20 and onward was great.  Is this first movement? the beginning makes it seem like there should be material before it.  Maybe adding a more exclamatory introduction would help.

Offline pencilart3

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #6 on: September 30, 2015, 05:45:49 AM
2:35 was sick.
You might have seen one of my videos without knowing it was that nut from the forum
youtube.com/noahjohnson1810

Offline swagmaster420x

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #7 on: September 30, 2015, 08:09:12 AM
The whole thing is friggin sick. It had so many bada$$ epic moments which I really love. Also the beginning reminded me of final fantasy tracks, likely because that's what I was just listening to before this.

Suggestion : Maybe give the start of the cadenza at 5:05 a bit more BAM FLAIR firepower aka add more notes +++ tempo

More notes:
I effing LOVE  the horns or w.e at 1:21

theholygideons

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #8 on: September 30, 2015, 08:24:29 AM
It's really up to you.. you can do almost anything with the melody.
I think the harmony is a bit inconsistent, sometimes it sounds classical other times it sounds like film music.

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #9 on: September 30, 2015, 08:53:07 AM
It's really up to you.. you can do almost anything with the melody.
I think the harmony is a bit inconsistent, sometimes it sounds classical other times it sounds like film music.
I acutally agree wit dis assessmet u sneaky bogan

theholygideons

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Re: Piano concerto in F major (original)
Reply #10 on: September 30, 2015, 09:12:59 AM
I acutally agree wit dis assessmet u sneaky bogan
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