I really like the deep rumbling beginning of this poem, as well as the beautiful ethereal ending, and the central turbulent climax. The parts in between did less for me, I found them a bit meandering and harmonically unclear. But there are some wonderful sonorities throughout !
Re: the video I found the superimposed starts quite annoying, rather as if my display needs a good dusting (which it does, but not thad badly :-) )
Your fingers are interesting to watch. It seems an unusual way to play. If it works for you, great - but I wonder how it would feel in fast passage work.