In my opinion overall you have done admirably. But it sounds like you missed and continued to miss the eighth rest in the opening octaves. I like the tempo of the choral but the descending passages could be a little more quiet so that the cords sound more connected and not as if they stop when the cascading notes begin but continue to sing until the next cord begins. Also the coda could be faster and with a little less pedal otherwise it begins to sound murky after a short time. Maybe using only half pedal most of the time at this part would help. Overall it sounds great. Keep up the good work!