Hey Noah!
So glad to hear about this. You're off to a nice start and I really like your playing. I'll just give some feedback on no.1 if you don't mind.
You've come a long way, I just have some personal ideas that you may use or throw away into the mental waste basket!
1 - You're shaping this very well, it could use an extra layer of depth though that will just make your playing more full of detail. This is subjective, but I feel like the level of drama is pretty similar throughout, you have dynamic contrast, but the contrast is pretty condensed. I'm not telling you to switch moods super fast, that would be distasteful. This will sound odd because I don't think anyone does it, but bear with me. Here's my idea, for the first section, stick your soft pedal down and play it exactly the way you play it. The soft pedal doesn't only lower dynamic levels, but it also changes the timbre and gives a different sense of color. You could play the exact same dynamic level with unacorda on and then off and it would still sound different even though the dynamics were the same. It just gives a different aura. Once the section repeats I see that you want to build more intensity, at this point play it out without the soft pedal, this will give an even GREATER tonal contrast and it'll sound really special.
2 - Pay attention to all the separate voices. Right now you're just bringing out the tops, which is great, I love what you're doing with it. But a couple of times you should hint at the lower voice in the right hand which is actually a reflection of the top voice.
3 - This is more of a technical problem that I think I hear. Are you tying the bottom note for five beats in the first four measures like Chopin writes in the score? I don't think I can hear the resonance of that G in the bottom voice.
Great job Noah! I can hear a ton of improvements. You're being much more thoughtful and musically sensitive now so I'm proud of your work. Never be discouraged by my comments, I'll always have an idea or two
