You play very nicely. It sounds very sincere. The toccata had a nice temper but I am afraid it was turned into comedic fodder by that pedal. If only Victor had thought of that...The fugue was good even with its flaws. What recording is perfect? The ones that are lies. Art is about truth so it stands to reason that flawless recordings should be avoided by artists. Unless of course you are perfect. Please listen to Cziffras recording of this if you have not already. There may be some ideas that have not yet occurred to you that may be helpful. How exactly did you go about transcribing the piece?