You play very nicely. It sounds very sincere. The toccata had a nice temper but I am afraid it was turned into comedic fodder by that pedal. If only Victor had thought of that...
The fugue was good even with its flaws. What recording is perfect? The ones that are lies. Art is about truth so it stands to reason that flawless recordings should be avoided by artists. Unless of course you are perfect. Please listen to Cziffras recording of this if you have not already. There may be some ideas that have not yet occurred to you that may be helpful.
How exactly did you go about transcribing the piece?
Basically, I just read from the organ score. In those parts where the organist would use the pedals, I would play the pedal parts in octaves with my left hand while playing both the left and right hand parts with my right hand. I have rather large hands, but even then, some of the chords are too big, so I have to eliminate some notes or condense them. I've listened to other transcriptions, and I generally didn't like them too much, with their fast running passages, extra notes, and excessive pedaling (ironically), turning it into a completely different piece. Cziffra's recording is certainly interesting, and has given me some ideas, though it definitely has those qualities I don't really like.
I appreciate your feedback, and I am interested to know what about the pedaling in the toccata you didn't like and how I could have done better. I personally thought it was minimally invasive. Thank you for telling me otherwise. And who is Victor? Are you talking about Victor Borge?
Flawless was probably the wrong word to use in this situation. By that word, I meant with no mistakes. I decided not to re-upload it until I have managed to record myself without all the slip-ups I have made here.
Once again, thank you for your feedback