This song I made but never got to learn because I lost the midi :(

[spenstar]

So this is the first draft of a song I wrote on grage band, but I accidentally deleted the midi file so I never got to print sheet music or revise it into something great. Anyways, do you guys like the song? If so maybe I'll try and figure out the midi again and learn it for real. The file is broken, so use the second one that I posted.

[spenstar]

Sorry I messed up the file. Here is the working one.

[marms]

this sounds like lord of the rings

[adodd81802]

I actually think this piece would sound better without piano.

That's my personal opinion. I don't find that strings and piano mix that well at the same time, it's usually one or the other, and if you have them together, the strings usually over power the piano more. I think some quiet background piano with the strings and then a small part where the piano played on it's own would be more thoughtful.


All in all not bad, in my opinion no composition is perfect, but to be inspired, to think of an idea and committing to it's creation deceives credit itself.